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Author:  gifted [ 19 Dec 2003, 14:52 ]
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You guys don't know yet. I'm a big sci-fi/fantasy fan, LOTR, eat your heart out. Over thirty books under my belt, that I can remember the titles of. Grand total is probably over a hundred.

Anyway, I write a bit too. This is a segment I just finished writing, figured I'd give you guys a peek. I'm thinking the biggest problems would be the HAS scene at the begining, and how the guy gets on the radio at the end. Not sure how those two things would work, but I've been told I'm good, so see how you like it. Don't start asking me questions about before or after this scene, I'm not sure if it'll stay, or about the events before and after it. Mostly written to see how some ideas pan out in writing.

http://www.livejournal.com/users/world_ ... /5058.html

"Some pup"
Nickname by Fenderstrat72
Author:  kingfrogger [ 19 Dec 2003, 15:46 ]
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"Moroni"... I've heard that name before, in a game I played.

“Democracy is two wolves and a lamb voting on what to have for lunch. Liberty is a well-armed lamb contesting the vote.” Benjamin Franklin, 1759
Author:  Hawg166 [ 19 Dec 2003, 19:32 ]
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Wasnt Moroni the angel that delivered the golden tablets containing the Book of Mormon to Joseph Smith ? Or was it to Brigham Young ? Sorry dude dint mean to mess up your thread.

By this time tomorrow I shall have gained either a pearage or Westminster Abbey........Nelson
Author:  FlyBoy [ 19 Dec 2003, 21:50 ]
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OK I liked it very good writing get a good story to back it up and I'd be enthralled, I like the fact of The Devil VS. God fighting to win over this man. I think the Katana was a little over board, maybe a K-bar, and also the Load warthog was too convent. Also I read a lot of things I had read before like "debris over the taxiway" look of new ways of writing things and other ways of describing death. I like how the battle is vague and is left up to our imaginations. Over all very good, hone your skills and paretic, and Re-work over and over and over again until it's just right. I like it. Keep on writing.

edited to say:
One Banana For you! <img src=newicons/anim_bannana.gif border=0 align=middle>

<img src="http://www.wpafb.af.mil/museum/research/bombers/b5/b62-7.jpg" border=0>
overthere? naw, we'll kill 'em from here.


Edited by - Flyboy on Dec 19 2003 8:51 PM
Author:  gifted [ 20 Dec 2003, 03:59 ]
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A k-bar? The wathog was convenient becuase they were going to take off, they ended up locking the planes up becuase of the attack.

The main character, like me, is Mormon, and I'm using Mormon theology. I'll be happy ot answer questions about my religion(Moroni gave Joseph Smith the plates, or rather, let him take them out of the hill), just remember that I haven't memorized the TO, so to speak.
<BLOCKQUOTE id=quote><font size=1 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica" id=quote>quote:<hr height=1 noshade id=quote> Also I read a lot of things I had read before like "debris over the taxiway" look of new ways of writing things and other ways of describing death.<hr height=1 noshade id=quote></BLOCKQUOTE id=quote></font id=quote><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica" size=2 id=quote> Explain a little bit more? and what's paretic? Some nice constructive criticism. I like that. There are a few more stories on my blog, like this one:
http://www.livejournal.com/users/world_ ... /1045.html
Mostly segments and stand-alones to hlep me figure out how to do stuff.


"Some pup"
Nickname by Fenderstrat72
Author:  gifted [ 12 Feb 2004, 23:53 ]
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Another one. This one is cool. Only part of it done, but i wanted to show it off.
http://www.livejournal.com/users/world_ ... 19194.html

"Some pup"
Nickname by Fenderstrat72
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