<BLOCKQUOTE id=quote><font size=1 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica" id=quote>quote:<hr height=1 noshade id=quote><b><i>AIR2MUD wrote</i>
Jimbo -
Just in case you're curious, I did a quick MIL sizing of your picture and figured out that the closer A-10 is at about 2,250' slant range from the tank column. The viewer is about 150' further away from the closest A-10. The A-10 coming off target and popping flares is about 2,400' from the viewer, or 2,250' from the closest A-10. Makes sense if he flew directly over the tank column, but I don't know any Hog driver who would want to do that...you can explain that away as a restriction placed on him by the ground FAC.
These are all very close numbers in a tactical situation. It would imply that it is a troops in contact situation, and that both A-10s have just come off from near-simultaneous (about 15 second spacing, actually) guns attacks on the column. My suggestion would be to have the farther A-10 turning AWAY from the viewer and the closer A-10. Also, you might want to make the tank on the far right (appears to be the lead tank) on fire as well. 2,250' is a might tight for a 180 degree turn, but if you had #1 (closer jet) going after the far right target with it burning some thick, black smoke, it would seem plausible. Maybe the tank that you currently show on fire could be in the processing of exploding with some nice secondaries as the ammo lights off inside the tank from #2s (farther jet) gun's pass. Now the number two and three tanks are caught in a pickle, and the Hogs can press back in for an immediate guns reattack to finish them off.
One last thing...when you get to working on the pilot of the closest jet, be sure he's looking back towards the targets. It looks like he has pulled almost 180 degrees from his run-in heading, and he would be looking for threats shooting at his wingman as well as getting a quick BDA before egressing and getting back into a tactical formation with his number two man (or woman!) to set up for the reattack.
Looks like it's coming along nicely, you can take or leave what I said and either way it's going to look good!</b><hr height=1 noshade id=quote></BLOCKQUOTE id=quote></font id=quote><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica" size=2 id=quote>
thanx for the input A2M <img src=icon_smile.gif border=0 align=middle> the tanks aren't set in stone atm - they're just a place holder till i get to that part: the idea of having secondaries from 1 of the tanks sounds like a really nice idea - i'll have to look into that <img src=icon_smile.gif border=0 align=middle>
tbh i wasn't looking @ distance when i was laying this picture out - i just put what i felt was dramatic on the page <img src=icon_smile.gif border=0 align=middle>
that mil scale u used - will it work the same when the picture is @ 42cm x 30cm ?
i'll get the #2 hog turning away <img src=icon_smile.gif border=0 align=middle> post more when i have time to paint <img src=icon_smile.gif border=0 align=middle> (this was sposed to b a flying visit in2 the office ...